Hi Maddison, My name is Sione and I attend St Pius X school , I really like your blue poem . Next time make the page more bigger and the writing as well .
I really like your poem, it is very creative and very blue since it is a blue poem. Guess what, my favourite colour is BLUE. I think your poem is awesome.
What a fabulous poem Maddy! Good effort honey
ReplyDeleteNice POEM!!! Just maybe don't use the word blue so many times
ReplyDeleteHi Maddison,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sione and I attend St Pius X school , I really like your blue poem . Next time make the page more bigger and the writing as well .
Best wishes
Hi there Maddison
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem, it is very creative and very blue since it is a blue poem. Guess what, my favourite colour is BLUE. I think your poem is awesome.
Kind regards
Iverson